Wednesday, September 15, 2010

your son and me are... 'we'


when i heard you maa.
i was really scared.
i dint know what to do,
im sure I sounded bizarre.  

that little day, maa,
with your little son,
i managed to entice him towards me,
using my love as the  binding ribbon.

i have met him just twice maa,
but couldn’t dare to say it then,
only when he left maa,
i missed and wished he would return.

then i lifted the phone one day, maa
and bared my heart to him,
my tongue and lips trembled maa,
i fluttered  like a netted fish with a trapped  fin. 

he said in the same tone,
over the phone
i was vision-less i found sight,
i had no wings, but i had flight.


then we walked a little further,
we stumbled, we had a fall,
but we held on to each other,
gained our feet, we now walk tall.

you know what maa,
it’s just barely been  over a month,
but to spend my life with maa,
i choose your little son.

i don’t know how you would feel,
for  you and i are just a phone call old.
but i simply love your genes maa,
the way they grow and mold. 

i know its not conventional maa,
your son and i cant be man and wife.
but more than that maa,
we’d redefine our world with all that’s kind and nice.

i want you to know maa,
that i will love your little part, till the end.
i know there exist none that are known maa, 

we will set the trend.

i could have sent you a private mail maa,
but this is our world, and it should know
that i will not just cow and bow,
if it is love, i will show!

so be it. be it so.

love you maa.

saasu maa!







lol. :) love you maa. 

11 comments:

Adee said...

loved it!
totallyyyyyyy!!!

Narendra said...

aiyyo!! cute it it!!

last line in the red block! awww!

all the best you both..

harshita s said...

aawww, that is so sweet

Regards
Harshita :)

kaveri g said...

Touched!
May your lives - yours, your parents, your love & his parents-be filled with love, laughter & happiness coz u all deserve it so.

kaveri g said...

Touched!
May your lives - yours, your parents, your love & his parents-be filled with love, laughter & happiness coz u all deserve it so.

ani_aset said...

awesome harish :)

Pinku said...

Aha!! loved it totally..

congrats on finding love...

and that was a beautiful post I am sure sasuma will relent...

be a good son in law though...and care for them as you would care for your own parents... thats what girls are told before they marry...I am saying the same to you cause i feel thats the only way to get into their hearts.

God bless both of you..

Hiyaa said...

I am so happy for you bro! We welcome Prakshit to the family.
It's a beautiful expression. Very well put and touchingly so!
God Bless you too!
Love n Hugs
Sandy

unsungpsalm said...

LOL!
Should've sent it to the scriptwriters of Dostanta... Could've helped improve the movie a bit!

Didn't know this blog was still alive :-)

Chandni said...

Aww... wish you guys a lot of happiness and love! :)

I particularly liked the sound of 'ma', BTW.

Looser King said...

Simply Simply Simply... Superb....... Dont Know wht else to say... U 2 Too good....and may gawd bless you both lot of happiness ...

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